on days poems don't hold us
"may the sky fold in
without drama." This line (and so many others) is golden. I love it. Your poem builds and tumbles onto itself as it goes along, and then it ends in a tiny, quiet space. Great job!
I appreciate you SO MUCH for saying this to me! :) Big hug & thank you for reading!
Wow… is this you ? Mohika, with your buddy ?
yes! me & my fiancé Prithvi at a mountain wedding :)
Nice …how old are you ?
"may the sky fold in
without drama." This line (and so many others) is golden. I love it. Your poem builds and tumbles onto itself as it goes along, and then it ends in a tiny, quiet space. Great job!
I appreciate you SO MUCH for saying this to me! :) Big hug & thank you for reading!
Wow… is this you ? Mohika, with your buddy ?
yes! me & my fiancé Prithvi at a mountain wedding :)
Nice …how old are you ?