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Rebecca Cook's avatar

"may the sky fold in

without drama." This line (and so many others) is golden. I love it. Your poem builds and tumbles onto itself as it goes along, and then it ends in a tiny, quiet space. Great job!

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Ryan's avatar

Wow… is this you ? Mohika, with your buddy ?

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