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Sally Burke's avatar

I love how you can write poetry without rhyme, it is not as easy as it seems. For many years I wrote a poem in each of grandchildren’s birthday cards until they turned 18, something they appreciated, and even more so when I put them in a book, together with photos from their birthdays. We still have three more grandchildren to reach 18, I just hope I’m still here to give them their books also, another 3, 4 and 6 years to go.

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Don Boivin's avatar

Your poem so very much reminds me of myself through my 20s. I had no idea then, of course, but my angst, my yearning, my dreams, were what made me who I am today. And I like who I am! 😊

I enjoy being part of your world, Mohika. Thank you, and thanks for sharing my work. That’s so awesome of you! 🙏💚

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